AypS's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SOLID RARC SURVIVORS]

For a moment, I thought the thing between the feet of the blue guy was his underwear! Making everything weird!

[you wont even hold me]

I like the position you put her in, but I think there is a problem with length of the neck and her right shoulder.

[knight]

It very well drawn, but I think the shoulder is not place where it should be. It seems a bit too much on the left (or peharps it's the head who is too much on the right), even with the sensation of burden.
There is also the top of the legs who are too flat with the upper body.
But again, I love your art style!

[Youmu Day (Touhou)]

Is it normal that one of her breast is significantly bigger than the other ?
Even with the perspective, the left one should be a bit smaller (I guess, I'm no professionnal).
I don't know the original character, so if this how she actually is, then there is no problem.

AKA-38CAUTION responds:

The breast are equal on both side (or roughly at the least); the reason it may look like the other are bit bigger are the clothes layer where I tend to make it smooth out the body lineart so that it dont look like a skintight clothing

Here the sketch if you're curious: https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/1fe7b8af18fd7ff14d93b12ce7e53b2c

[The Comfort Chair]

I really like it, but I still have some question:
- those circle, are they some sort of niddle?
- do you struggle to draw legs or you didn't have any inspiration for it?

HeelsforEels responds:

They can be needles if you want, why not? I can draw legs, you can see legs in other things I make, but my drawings are more about a mood, I don't think too much while making them and sometimes I guess they need that kind of unfinished look... drawing is more of a subconscious/therapeutic thing for me, so you can see the result the way you want. Thank you!

[Asharan]

Your style is vert impressive! But I can't understand what is the triangle. Because for me the head is the part at the right of the triangle. (I don't know if it's an oc or if you had a model)